Sunday, May 4th, 2014 03:08 pm
He said,
"Will you?"
She said,
"Yes, and...
I want THIS too!"
He said,
"Oooh..."
She said,
"Ummm!"
And then
"Move your elbow a little bit, hon...!"
"How should I move it? Perhaps like... This?"
She answered with a kiss.









This has been my week 9 entry for therealljidol, and the prompt was "Yes, and...".

Voting for Tribe 1 is HERE. If you liked this entry, please vote and help me to write another week!

I encourage everyone to enjoy the entries that my writing colleagues have also posted, available (HERE).
Monday, May 5th, 2014 02:30 am (UTC)
*silly grin*
Monday, May 5th, 2014 05:13 am (UTC)
Several hours later I realize that this is probably your LJ Idol entry and not necessarily a comment on your life. But I hope it is! :)
Monday, May 5th, 2014 06:08 am (UTC)
It's a tangential comment on my (very happy!) life, and just kind of how things feel, if that makes sense...

And in writing this I was reminded of another poem I'm going to have to go look up now.
Monday, May 5th, 2014 02:31 pm (UTC)
This is cute both literally and/ metaphorically.
Tuesday, May 6th, 2014 04:40 am (UTC)
d'awww. thank you.
Monday, May 5th, 2014 03:33 pm (UTC)
Adorable!
Tuesday, May 6th, 2014 04:40 am (UTC)
gosh. Thanks!
Tuesday, May 6th, 2014 02:09 am (UTC)
love it :)
Tuesday, May 6th, 2014 04:40 am (UTC)
thanks. =)
Tuesday, May 6th, 2014 02:53 am (UTC)
this is really cute!
Tuesday, May 6th, 2014 04:40 am (UTC)
aw, thank you!
Tuesday, May 6th, 2014 02:42 pm (UTC)
Aww <3..short and sweet!
Tuesday, May 6th, 2014 04:41 pm (UTC)
That was the hope.
After I posted I realized it had echoes of an E.E. Cummings poem, which pleased me.
Tuesday, May 6th, 2014 03:18 pm (UTC)
So cute! AW
Tuesday, May 6th, 2014 04:40 pm (UTC)
*grin* thank you.
Wednesday, May 7th, 2014 06:58 am (UTC)
This is cute.
Wednesday, May 7th, 2014 04:08 pm (UTC)
Thanks.
Wednesday, May 7th, 2014 07:09 pm (UTC)
It IS cute, and the happiness in it is infectious. :D
Saturday, May 10th, 2014 06:56 am (UTC)
awww, thanks very much!
Saturday, May 10th, 2014 03:11 am (UTC)
Very sweet. :)
Saturday, May 10th, 2014 06:56 am (UTC)
omg that icon... too friggin cute! <3
Saturday, May 10th, 2014 07:43 pm (UTC)
User [livejournal.com profile] belenen referenced to your post from lj idol recommended reading week 8 (http://belenen.livejournal.com/560541.html) saying: [...] http://labelleizzy.livejournal.com/1319432.html [...]
Saturday, May 10th, 2014 08:21 pm (UTC)
Agh! My first rec!!

*squee*
*flail*
Sunday, May 11th, 2014 05:31 pm (UTC)
aww, how cute.
Monday, May 12th, 2014 06:04 am (UTC)
hee, thank you. =)
Monday, May 12th, 2014 01:18 am (UTC)
Aww, very cute!
Monday, May 12th, 2014 06:04 am (UTC)
thanks!
Monday, May 12th, 2014 10:58 am (UTC)
I considered something like this for the prompt, so I'm glad someone went that way! Neat!
Monday, May 12th, 2014 03:26 pm (UTC)
lol Very cute!
Tuesday, May 13th, 2014 01:32 am (UTC)
Cute!
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